Uh oh, the feedback session didn't go well. We managed to finish the edit in time and personally were quite happy with the outcome and confident it was good. Our tutor however struggled to understand the piece and thinks we need to alter it a lot if we want it to work, he suggested we;
Create a visual key at the start of the pulling back shot or ELS shots
Create a bolder sense of pace
Use less still medium shots
Try to create a "revealing rhythm"
Maybe do more shooting.
Me and Joe talked about the feedback a little however he is away until Wednesday and this must be done for Friday so I shall be going to Edale to do some pick ups on Wednesday and will be planning the edit on Wednesday too. I am definitely going to try and create more pace in the edit once there is more footage to use, with more footage I can use some extremely fast cuts and not worry about running out of shots. I also think the idea of a visual motif will strengthen the short and I will try and work that into the edit.
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